Talk:Hasan b. 'Ali al-Hadha' al-'Ummani
Dear translator/supervisor,
The first paragraph of Al-Hasan b. 'Ali al-Hadha' al-'Ummani was checked for any possible error and for its compliance with wikishia guidelines. For instance, "minor occlusion" was replaced with "minor occultation" because occlusion means blockage of a blood vessel while here the term occultation must be used. Since in wikishia, the term Shi'a is preferred to Shiite (although shiite is also correct and used by some scholars), all cases were changed to Shi'a. For technical reasons, it is recommended not to transliterate names other than the lead so Ibn Idris and allama Hilli changed back into their normal forms to be properly linked into their pages without any problem. Changes in second paragraph include the following: if though is used at the beginning of a sentence it should be a clause without a verb for example Though more expensive, the new model is safer. But here in the second paragraph it was used with a verb so "although" was a better option. Some other changes include: His book is "al-mutamassik" not "al-mustamsak". "Al" was added to some names.
Yours, Mohammad.Kh
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