Talk:Malcolm X

1- The biography lacks further information at least five lines for every sentence used here, why so little! let's say we are talking about a 50s to 60s hero of the black men whom he had held many sessions speaking about freedom and humanity before being brutally put down by the racists!

2-Malcolm was the face of resistance and hope for the imprisoned minds of the dark ages of the United States of America. We need to speak more about his childhood. I mean, readers want to know more about the slavery, discrimination and everything that obviously existed in those times. So to begin with, you may want to go over the history of America in the late 50s or 40s to get a clearer picture of the then USA. Interestingly, that part of the history mentions a lot about the America we have forgotten! And later we can invite readers to know about his childhood and on.

3- After prison where he met with Islam as a ray of hope and a key to higher positions of human dignity, after a while, he went to Mecca and later to many known Muslim countries meeting with their leaders and exchanging their theories, ideologies and beliefs about the reality of Islam.

4- In Activism; by looking into history, you can find most of his life focused on making great contributions to black awakening by having an approach similar to the Prophet (s) in the Ignorance era ( he sort of freed the slaves both by his tone and actions). We kind of need to expand upon his time and his actions as he is a major figure in the Afro-American history.

5- This text consists of a variety of typing issues that need to be fixed.

6- The last but not the least, when it comes to death of a leader who was shot to death 16 times at his chest, shouldn't we make the readers get a better vision about his last-moment speech before we talk about his death ( so unfair to say "death" here though he was the victim of an assassination plot)?

S.J.Mosavi (talk) 12:45, 19 September 2015 (IRDT)